Uncle Bad Touch Posted July 20, 2014 Report Share Posted July 20, 2014 It had been two weeks since the infection hit Chernarus. This new air born virus supposedly came from one of the crew members on the tanker that had crashed at Rify which spread to Berenzino. The United Nations was brought in to contain the outbreak of pathalovan virus in cities. They had set up quarantine zones and checkpoints around Chernarus hoping to minimize the spread of the infection but quickly became an outbreak in major cities. I remember soon after it all started I had packed food, a couple bottles of water, a Colt 1911 with a just a single magazine, and a medical kit into my Red Volkswagen Golf and tried to head out of the city. I had been driving for some time and got to a slowed line of cars that looked to have the same intentions as myself. It was a United Nations checkpoint at Krutoy Cap scanning for any signs of infected or "sick" people trying to leave the country. I remember the high H-barrier walls that lined the road like high cliffs in a valley and the smell, the smell was something I had never smelt before but would become very common in the coming months. After waiting for almost ten minutes I had finally gotten into the checkpoint and I was directed to go through the tents for a random search, "random my ass." I whispered under my breathe as I was escorted through. They patted me down to check for any weapons finding my Colt wedged in the back of my waist and confiscated it. I was then taken for further inspection by some doctor who later deemed me to be what he called "questionable." The guard that had the ghastly job of escorting random people around had an M4A1 which was in a pretty rough state with some sort of red dot sight. The god awful smell that lingered around the checkpoint was so potent it was starting to make me feel sick. I was at what seemed like the twentieth tent where I couldn't take the stench of the area and was sick all over the floor. That was a really bad time to be sick. While I was on the ground vomiting everything that was in my system up all over the floor I noticed an increase in the amount of people circling me. When I was finished painting the floor with my digested food I looked up to see rifles, shotguns and hand guns being pointed at my face with every one screaming something different at me. After a couple seconds of panic by the guards of the checkpoint I was grabbed by the arms and dragged to a train platform. Turns out I was being going to be deported to who the hell knows where. While I sat there waiting for something to happen whether it a train or me to be shot for being infected I discovered what the smell was, it was a the smell of death. Corpses piled on top of each other in a mass grave just burning, they were burning infected people that weren't being sent on trains. After sitting at the platform for about half an hour a train came and I was thrown inside one of the three box cars. I picked myself up off the wooden floor of the box cart only to see the door close and hear the sound of a heavy padlock and chain lock the door shut. I sat there for what seemed like hours while I heard others being loaded into the other box carts and the doors being locked. The train jerked forward in an attempt to start moving and soon we were slowly starting to move down the track. Little did I know that this was going to just be the beginning of the hell I was soon to endure. Hope you guys enjoyed that a little bit. I kind of enjoy a back story to add ons but maybe that is just me. XD Screenshots to the add on:http://imgur.com/a/YKL3b Download link:https://www.dropbox.com/s/tzswu1lle2a8lxi/Krutoy-Cap-Cleansing-Facility.sqf?dl=0 Init.sqfexecVM "\z\addons\dayz_server\Maps\krutoy-cap-cleansing-facility.sqf"; This is my first published add on so please leave some positive or negative criticism but please be polite.Also please notify me if a link is broken or if it in general doesn't work. Thanks -Uncle CartoonrBOY, Quasid and axeman 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CartoonrBOY Posted July 20, 2014 Report Share Posted July 20, 2014 Awesome map addition and great story. I really like that you care about what happened here; it shows that you sir are not one of the fickle players I meet so often lately: into guns n' ammo and a quick fix. I too try to tell a story with the map, I think it's important to differentiate DayZ as a game with a history, emotion and set in a desperate time, instead of just another crude quake clone full of too many guns/tanks and shouting... I've added this to my map and, wandering around it on foot tells a potent tale of what went before. Thank you so much for sharing. It's a shame all the real DayZ players now have their own servers, otherwise I'd invite you to tea...(fresh lamb with beans my friend). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uncle Bad Touch Posted July 20, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2014 Much appreciated, I have written better but it was 3 in the morning and I didn't want to wait any longer! XD Hope the add on is enjoyed. -Edit Also I don't have my own server, tend to hop! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CartoonrBOY Posted July 20, 2014 Report Share Posted July 20, 2014 You are welcome in my Chernarus anytime. You should come look around and see what I meant...stories unfold as more of the map is discovered. So hop on for a bit and see what you think; it ain't a gun fest, but a survivors nightmare. The latest player I had said "This server is very hostile" but I disagree - it is if you expect to be spoon fed, definitely a challenge to most then... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uncle Bad Touch Posted July 22, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2014 Much appreciated I will be sure to check it out :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raptoruk Posted July 25, 2014 Report Share Posted July 25, 2014 Could you have a look at the link pls as it appears broken cheers Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uncle Bad Touch Posted July 25, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2014 nope never mind it does seen to be broken EDIT* I replaced it with a new link so hopefully it works now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quasid Posted July 26, 2014 Report Share Posted July 26, 2014 I love this addition. Keep it up, would love to see more of this typ. Less loot and more atmosphere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uncle Bad Touch Posted July 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2014 Much appreciated, thanks. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raptoruk Posted September 17, 2014 Report Share Posted September 17, 2014 Tried again on the link and get a 404 error message saying The file you're looking for has been moved or deleted. I would like to add this to my server but obviously need the link to work please.Cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lonewolfgaming Posted September 18, 2014 Report Share Posted September 18, 2014 Same here, tried today to dropbox the file Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uncle Bad Touch Posted September 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2014 I will see what I can do.EDIT: The link has been restored. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raptoruk Posted September 18, 2014 Report Share Posted September 18, 2014 Uncle, star man thanks for fixing the link so promptly, I will let you know how installation goes, much appreciated for sharingcheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uncle Bad Touch Posted September 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2014 Yeah this was my first upload so it might be shit... So here are my others that are hopefully less shitty. XD Novy checkpoint: Kumyrna Safe haven: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skittles Posted September 19, 2014 Report Share Posted September 19, 2014 That United Nations poster in the last picture. If it was only green and black with a suit and ? for a head. I would spam my map with it everywhere. NICE ADD ON ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uncle Bad Touch Posted September 19, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2014 Thanks Skittles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...